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 ## Update 6-3-2021: Very Old Film
 
-Since this was first written I've done a fair bit of testing using
-low agitation with very old, expired film.  So far, I've
-discovered several things worth noting:
+Since this was first written, I've done a fair bit of testing using low
+agitation with very old, expired film.  So far, I've discovered
+several things worth noting:
 
 
 * Old Kodak Tri-X (expired 7/1993) takes semistand processing
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   horrible bromide drag at the hanger suspension locations - even
   using the most minimal support.
 
-  Whether this is the nature of this film or its age isn't clear.
-  I have to do further testing with other Plus-X vintages.  What
-  is clear is that this is definitely induced by the Pyrocat-HD.
-  When I took the same film/scene and semistand processed it in
-  D-23 1:1 for 60 minutes, I got perfect negatives that actually
-  showed slightly better film speed than the Pyrocat-HD negs.
+  Whether this is the nature of this film or its age isn't clear.  I
+  have to do further testing with other Plus-X vintages.  What is
+  clear is that this is definitely induced by the Pyrocat-HD.  When I
+  took the same film/scene and semistand processed it in D-23 1:1 for
+  60 minutes, I got perfect negatives that actually showed slightly
+  better film speed than the Pyrocat-HD negs.
+
 
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